“ I think what you posted was actually very logical.
However, what about this? suppose you added a
little information? I am not saying your information isn't good., but
what if you added a headline to possibly get people's attention? I mean InsertYourData is
a little plain. You could peek at Yahoo's front page and see how
they create news headlines to grab people to click. You might try adding a video or a related
picture or two to grab readers excited about what you've got to say.
Just my opinion, it could bring your website a little livelier. ”